The Anzac Puppy

W.A.L.T to write a flash back from a different perspective using show not tell. Next time I could add more detail.

The Anzac Puppy

It was a shivering cold winter at night I was born. My name is Freda. One day my owner put me in a box to see if anyone wanted to have me. I was so confused I wondered why my owner put me in a box. In the afternoon a Soldier named Sam saw me and wanted to have me. So the Soldier took me to war with him. But he promised the girl Named Lucy he would bring me back safe and sound. So Sam trained with me to get ready for war.

When people started attacking Sam and I were frightened and confused. A few minutes later me and Sam were starting to melt, there were loud noises in the background. BOOM, CRASH, SMASH! We wondered when is this going to end. Days later the crashes have stopped and the land was silent. No one was fighting and there were no loud noises. A few seconds later we heard the good news the war has ended. So now we can go home. So me and Sam started to walk home. When we got to the house we didn’t see a little girl we saw a woman. Lucy was no longer a girl anymore she is a woman. Sam was no longer a boy anymore he was a man, and I was no longer a puppy I was All grown up. Lucy was so surprised to see me and I was surprised to see her as well.