WALT: Use the correct structure for a recount. The first week of term two we are learning to write a recount. I enjoyed doing this because I get to write about what I did in the holidays. Next time I will try to improve on adding more detail.
Hanmer Springs
On Saturday the 29th of April me and my family were planning to go to Hanmer Springs. We left at about 9:00 am to 10:00 am in the morning. Me and my family were so excited.
When we arrived at Hanmer Springs we first went to check in a Hotel for one night. After we checked in the Hotel we went to have lunch at a Restaurant right next to our Hotel. The food at the Restaurant was very delicious.
After we had lunch we went back to the Hotel and got our stuff ready to go to the swimming pools / Hot pools. A few minutes later we were off to the swimming pools / Hot pools. When we arrived at the swimming pools / hot pools we went to the changing rooms. When we were all changed we went into a hot pool.
The next thing we did is go on the water slide. The water slide was like a squiggly snake. After that me my dad and my brother went on the super bowl together, while my Mum watched us sliding down together while she was in the hot pool.
At the end of the day it was time to go home. When we got out of the hot pools we were shivering cold. We felt like we were as cold as an ice block. After we were all changed we had dinner at a Restaurant and went back to the Hotel.
On the second day we checked out of the Hotel and we started to drive to the jet boat. A few minutes later we arrived at the jet boat, first we had to put on rain coats and life jackets for safety. After we put all our gear on we went to the jet boat. When everyone was on the jet boat the driver started the engine. Then suddenly the jet boat zoomed off it felt like it was as fast as a plane taking off.
When the jet boat ride was over we got changed, then we went back to the car and drove back home.
When we got home I said to myself that was such an awesome time at Hanmer Springs. I wish we could go to Hanmer Spring again.