WALT: Use a variety of punctuation.
I enjoyed doing this because to create my own story.
Next time I will try and add more describing words.
The Mischievous Mouse
One frosty cold day in an extremely warm house there lived a very mischievous mouse named Rose. Rose was always naughty, cheeky, fearless and very doughty. Rose always blames her little mouse friend for the trouble she caused, which never end very well at all. One time she threw a hard thing over the window and it shattered. Soon after the incident she blamed her friend and said “She did it!”.
Rose always hunted for cheese to nibble but only the cheese made her mouth dribble. One day she snuck out of bed to steal some cheese but when she got closer she started to dribble. She just couldn’t wait to nibble. But when she arrive when the cheese was kept she spotted the cheese that made her mouth dribble. the light as bright as the sun switched on and Rose got spotted. Rose got put in the cold for the pass night, and that was when her lies ended from then.
Now Rose has learnt her lesson and has turned herself around, she will never tell lies ever again.
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