Hi Amber, I really liked your persuasive writing on if phones should be banned. I liked it but I didn't really find it that convincing. Try adding onto your current points or add more convincing points. Sincerely, Sione
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Hi Amber,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your persuasive writing on if phones should be banned. I liked it but I didn't really find it that convincing. Try adding onto your current points or add more convincing points.
Sincerely, Sione