WALT - Use show not tell. This week our class has been learning about show not tell. We had to write about a feeling using show not tell. I enjoyed doing this because I got to choose what feeling I got to write about. Next time I will add more detail.
I looked around and I froze I didn’t know what to do. I started trembling with fear my heart started to beat faster and faster. I started to breathe heavily. I swallowed hard. I tried to speak but my mouth was locked I tried to take a step but my legs felt like they were glued to the ground. I felt shivers down my spine and goosebumps started appearing on my arms.
Hi Amber,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing about show not tell. I really like how descriptive you are. Next time you can add more sentences to keep it more interesting. Other than that, I think that you did a really good job.